I need support with this Writing question so I can learn better.
After you finish reading all comments and revising your essay, write a response memo about the feedback you received, commenting on the kinds of revisions you made, what comments were particularly helpful, and how the workshop impacted your revisions.
it should not be long i believe one paragraph will be enough.
this is the feedback:
First, you don’t need to include the section headings. Those were just to show the breakdown of the paper on the assignment sheet.
Don’t forget to include a thesis that presents your stance on the article. Is it effective or not and why?
The summary should only be one paragraph and should be shorter than the analysis. The analysis/critique is the most important part of the paper.
The summary seems to present multiple observations about things the article does, but it does not fully develop a discussion of what makes those things effective or not. I’m still not sure of your assessment of the success of the article. one body will be enough